Imagine Us in Technicolor

15Dec10

V.1 PROSE-ISH

Spark remembrance from Technicolor dreams. More clues than mystery novels, much more difficult to read. Don’t recall the last time you called but recount encounters on counters, chairs and floors imaginatively. Plan to wrap this up, out with the new in with the old. Be compassionate and patient. This just might be a void rendezvous.

V.2 POETRY-ISH

You spark remembrance in Technicolor
dreams. More clues than mystery novels,
much more difficult to read.
Don’t recall the last time you called
but I recount our encounters imaginatively.
I plan to wrap this up, out with the new
in with the old. I will be compassionate and patient.
Sometimes I fear you may be a void rendezvous.

Which version did you like better?

Suggestions are welcome… This was a fun project using words from my horoscope, I’m an Aries by the way! :)

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